Pretty much the same thing I said before
I don't know how old this one is though lol. But criticism even on old stuff can help.
I think I see the same problem here though, you really should try to work hard on getting your really good sounds to give a bigger, better, fuller sound and get what's so cool in your head into my earballs.
Also once that open hat came in I just have to say YOU NEED TO TRY TO LAYER SOUNDS TOGETHER. That one hat on it's own isn't serving the purpose, I get what you're trying to do but it's ALWAYS a good idea to try to layer sounds with percussion so that you get an even more unique and fuller sound.
Great job though, just needs some details lol!
i love the new bass line you added and the name is awesome:)
thank you good sir
Checking out the fixed version!
Damn dude, you upped the kick. I like the song more now. The drums are perfect and so is the synth in this. They go very well together. You did a good job on this one. In fact, it has inspired me to get FL and start making music myself. Then you can critique my work. :) 5/5 10/10 because I love the sounds and I think you have a lot of potential.
thanks very much dude, i promise ill check out your stuff when you get FL
The drums need to be changed up, too standard. It's a pretty cool synth loop you have with this one. I do like the volume on the bass synth as well, even if it doesn't mix in too well. My only other issue with it is that it stays a bit too similar all the way through. Still a good track though.
yeah i agree it is pretty repetitive
its actually quite hard to hear some of the synths i have running through this one, they get a little drowned out
as requested i'm checking out some of your stuff. Not bad at all really. I got to say this is like alot of stuff you hear here on NG though. The beat is something thats not uncommon with the songs here. The bass drum is a biiiit to loud. though it does got a great melody and has alot of potential. Keep on it for sure.
yeah its really hard for me to make any of my drumbeats interesting
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