could be better....
As you probably know already, there are many wrong notes.
Practice more, and try to stay focused when playing this song.
Another thing I find wrong is the tempo. You're either speeding up or slowing down, and that is a big problem. Try to keep the same tempo throughout the song.
Last thing, at the end of the song, I see you tried to loop it. Either make it loop better, or just leave it as an ending.
Nice try, but I think it could be a lot better with practice.
Voting Details - 1.40
Voted 2 - (raised to 1.80)
Voter # - 11
2/5 and 5/10
Note: Here's some tips that I use:
1. Work on the song a piece at a time, then put it all together.
2. Download the midi file for this, and learn the notes from there. That's how I learn songs.
Note 2: As Lighty158 below me said, the piano is tricky, but if you put a lot of effort into learning how to play it, you'll definitely get better at it.
Although I understand you're willing to show your musical talent... but there are just too many mistakes in this song alone.
00:15. Just listen to that.
I suggest a little more practice. You can use this time to ask yourself "Does this sounds right?" and take several cleaning sessions in your free time.
Putting the production quality aside, I know how tricky it is to play piano, and match notes. I gave you a 3 for effort. Keep practicing.
I'd practice it...
And try again. So many mistakes. It's so choppy too. Practice it a little more before you submit it here.