dude, your main pic
what kind of smoke is that?
if its the kind im thinking of, "high" five.
well anyways. the guitar shouldnt be as twangy as it is, eq that some.
(rly, eq solves everthing)
its a little dry, needs chorus.
i loooked at some of your music, and its really nice, but it needs something to make it pop out and get people to notice. like better eq and some effing choruses.