Interesting effects
But sorry, it sounds a bit weird to me. The melodies are very interesting and that's what I like about it, but the whole mixing is just of low quality I'm afraid, but you're going in the right direction! I hope you like constructive criticism!
Put more High on the master and a little bass off. It sounds a bit chaotic in the mix like this.
Nice idea and melody, just not such good quality.
See ya, good luck
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