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Oct 5, 2008 | 12:14 AM EDT
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Song
6.9 MB
7 min 31 sec
Score
3.49 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.49 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,334 Plays | 100 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - New Wave
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Author Comments

Here's a more experimental tune inspired by a dream of mine

Reviews


CoopCoop

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not sure about the dreams

It was a good song until the dream sequence started, which takes away from the original song so much that you actually feel that you're in a different tune - there's too much variation there and it feels like you need to split the song into two pieces and treat them like the two separate entities that they have become.

The first piece sounded excellent, with a well worked tune and vocals to suit near-perfectly. With that under your belt, you must have felt like you were able to vary the track, but for me, it backfired.

In the last minute or so of the track, where the music starts and stops, it really sounds awful, so you need to do something drastic about that - most songs of this length are justified in being so long, but this seems like you're trying too hard to reach this pre-determined length.

[Review Request Club]


soulofbass responds:

thanks for your input, i don't agree with everything you say but i appreciate the time you took to write this


darknessdwellerdarknessdweller

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Review

I don't like it very much,

Too upbeat for my style.
Sounds more like Rock until, 2:00, then sounds like a robot with runescape instruments playing Mavis Beacon!
Then, it gets better @ 2:54, and better @ 3:04... still a hint of Runescape,
still the voices @ 3:33, kinda sounds technological for most of the third minute..
and into the 4th minute, still voices.. (voices = the point?), then calms down @ 4:26.. then gets bad around 4:55... stays that way until.. about 5:52, then it calms down... now it's back to upbeat, but almost like ROCK AND RUNESCAPE XD, then breaks up a little @ 6:30 to 6:53, then I hear strumming which basically ends the song.

Overall:
2/5 ; 5/10
~darknessdweller of the Review Request Club


soulofbass responds:

thanks for your review though negative it was. runescape i know not, except that it is a game correct? hope to hear from you again sometime ^^


HaggardHaggard

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Interesting

The into sounds a bit dissonant sometimes. Both the vocals and the instruments. It still sounded nice, maybe a little bit too repititve, though.

The part after the intro reminds me A LOT of Radiohead's "Morning Bell/Amnesiac". Too bad the vocals are so low here.

The third part is my favorite part. It creates a very good atmosphere with the fast paced main beat and the long hold notes.

The last part seems a bit strange to me. It's too quiet overall and I just don't know what to think about it.

Overall, the song is very interesting and the various parts keep the listener interested, even though the song is over 7 minutes long.

{ Review Request Club }


soulofbass responds:

Thanks for the review, the RRC seems to have some really good reviewers. still no one's really discussed the lyrics or subject matter but im glad you find it interesting. i love radiohead so i wouldnt be surprised to see some influences in there, sigur ros as well probably.


sirtom93sirtom93

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good.

I'm writing this review while listening, so I can build up a better opinion, also because it's the longest piece I have ever reviewed on the AP.

Initially, this song seemed quite cluttered, I didn't think the instruments complimented each other well. The singing wasn't that great, but then after the very start it all came together, the vocals really went well with the instruments and it just sounded great, a good tune.

The second part was a very brave move, it was completely different from the intro and didn't flow on from it very well - seemed almost dream like, the sounds you were using added to this feel. There were some bizarre vocals in this part, but it did sound good, if not very strange. There were some good synths in this section.

The start of the third section had some pretty good instrumental progression, also the initial vocals from this section sounded like a man speaking through a speaker with echo - that's just what I thought. This part had a fast tempo but still seemed rather slow. It was shorter than the section prior but I think this was good as it put more emphasis on the part prior and the part after it.

The last part was also strange, although I'm getting the feeling this whole piece is. The chopped up beats were good, as well as the vocals. Throughout, the guitar really added to a strange feeling.

This piece was emotive and that was good.

Keep up the good work.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.


soulofbass responds:

thank you for your great review! bizarre, strange, emotive, these are all good to hear :D


FroFro

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Interesting.

During the entire thing I enjoyed the guitar.

The first part was alright and it started out perfectly fine. I do think that it began to become quiet repetitive though with the same exact lyrics throughout the entire section. Perhaps changing up the lyrics a little bit to add more variety would make this part a little better.

The second part was quiet dreamlike I will admit. I do though think that the music overpowered the vocals. It sounds like that's the effect that you were going for, but it would still be nice if either the music was a tad quieter or if the vocals were just a bit louder so they were a little bit easier to understand.

The third part seemed to pick up a little bit, but at the same time remained to be relaxing and soothing. It was probably one of my more favorite parts of the song.

The fourth part was rather soothing throughout the entire part, but it seemed to be a bit glitchy. Again, I don't know if you meant it to be this way or if it was suppose to be this way, or even if it's just my computer messing up, but it did sound out of place a little. The voices here were just a tad bit quiet again, but I thought they were much clearer. I perhaps had sort of a weak ending, but it wasn't that bad.

Overall - The entire thing was pretty interesting. It changed up so many times that it never really good boring and it had a lot of variety in it. The length of the submission is very long. =P My computer had a hard time loading it, but I finally got it loaded.

~ Review Request Club ~


soulofbass responds:

thnx 4 the great review corky, i gtta give you prop for listening to it all and understanding the 4 movements, the voice has different dynamic when on headphones and i usually mix on headphones, the last part is supposed to sound kinda clitchy, its the part where i question my sanity.