Pretty good.
I really liked this melody. It was awesome! You just need much better synths, and download the VEC1 and VEC2 packs for drums.
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I need comments and feedback! I would like to know what I can do better. This is only my 3rd song and hopefully more on the way when I become inspired by something.
The melody is fine...
You just need some major fix-ups though. First of all, use effects and filters, they give your song more depth and feeling, you want to have sound from low to high frequencies, especially for this type of song. Next, use more powerful drums and synths, they feel lacking. If you are using fruity loops, look into the sytrus patches, they are pretty good.
FrostGuy responds:
Alright man thanks. I just have only toyed with FL and don't know too too much about it, but I'd really like to know more.
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