This Song Is Great most people will tell you "i dont like it humph" right now i can picture you playing this song. i am also a musican and i love this song please finish it :). ps this kind of reminds me of shopen for some reason.
Kind of hypnotic. As a person who's never heard anything by 'Immortal Technique', it sounds completely original. Give ya some time and you'll be on your way making a few more new songs. From my point of view, (well, this isn't really my type of upbeat, bouncy music) it's definately not a piece of crap. I say, work on some other stuff, and if you have some spare time, come back to this :) Also, this piece doesn't have your usual touch to it, you're not losing it, are you? ;) kidding.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.