Hey, it's catchy
Hey man, this aint half bad. I really like it. If i ever get round to making a flash i'm gonna see if i can put this in.
Another song I made for my multimedia class (same project as Dark Dungeon). feedback is appreciated, as well as any ideas you may have.
Hey, it's catchy
Hey man, this aint half bad. I really like it. If i ever get round to making a flash i'm gonna see if i can put this in.
Thanks! I actually hate this song, its so repetitive, and it's one of my first songs lol. My newer stuff is better IMO, but thanks for the compliment =)
Soothing
This song reminds me a bit of music from some video game, but I just can't recall exactly which one. The sounds you used were really nice, I especially liked the guitar sound you used from the beginning. For minor improvements to this song, I would suggest: 1) reducing the pan distance between the instruments for just a bit (i realize you were going for the greater impact of the right side joining in afterwards, but with such extreme pan differences, the first half minute is too obviously right-sideless), 2) softening the entry of the electric guitar lead, it seems to disrupt the beautiful, atmospheric development of the song you had up until it came in, 3) increasing the duration of the final chord, this ending seems a bit rushed and breaks the snoozy feeling of the song (of course, all of this is purely my opinion, so It might be that I'm wrong).
With these minor modifications, this would be a truly perfect song for relaxing. Actually, listening to it looped while writing this did make me a bit sleepy. ;) It reminded me a bit of ending themes for some movies or video games as it left a sort of tranquil feeling, as though all of the previous problems have disappeared, and everyone is suddenly at ease after a long time.
All together, it's a great song! Well done!
No, I completely agree. I finally got everything recorded, and the ending got messed up somehow. The electric does come in pretty loud, but I thought it was just me being hard on myself. As for the panning, I'll try to make it not so apart.
Thank you for your input and the time it took to write all that!
It's nice and relaxing,
This is one of those songs that are great to listen too whatever mood you're in, i really like it, keep up the good work.
Thank you!
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