i will say this song needs some serious work but it is one of ur first songs
so maybe u can re-edit it and make something better but right now it just sounds like a buch of randome noise
but i can see where ur comming from only haveing ur music maker for a month or so and ur only gettin this review because i randomlly typed in 17528
and the first thing i would do is get rid of the falling beat
but i think this song has potential as a techno but now im off to listen to some of ur newer stuff :D
Holy mother of God...
This is the single worst song I have ever heard! What drugs were you on while conjuring this horrible assault on my ears? It had no definitive beat at all! What the hell were you thinking? Honestly, I am suprised that songs like this aren't removed to free up space for songs that are half way decent! This song actually made me sick to my stomach, and I use the term "song" very loosely! Please promptly remove your music software so no one else ever has to go through what I went through tonight! Thank you very much!
I actually have quite a few good songs that have been used in flash submissions and voted on very highly. I will admit that this is not a good song, mainly because I hadn't had the software but for maybe a month, but I guess that's not worthy of consideration in your book. You looked at this song two years after I made it. Maybe you could have looked at Temporal Rave, or Interrigattion, or one of "The Creep"s, but I guess you decided to go back into the past and look at one of the songs I made and assumed that all the songs that I've ever made sounded like that.
Maybe when you've made some music, we can have an intelligent conversation and discuss the follies and idiosyncrasies of this song, but until then, go fuck yourself.