ehhh?
i will say this song needs some serious work but it is one of ur first songs
so maybe u can re-edit it and make something better but right now it just sounds like a buch of randome noise
but i can see where ur comming from only haveing ur music maker for a month or so and ur only gettin this review because i randomlly typed in 17528
and the first thing i would do is get rid of the falling beat
but i think this song has potential as a techno but now im off to listen to some of ur newer stuff :D