powerful and immersive, but can use work.
ok so negs and some mixing stuff as you asked:
the snare roll is a little weak if you ask me. try varying the frequency of the hits more, centering it on the mix and getting rid of the dramatic reverb, and maybe choosing a different sound for the snare, if u asked me.
the synth that starts at :28 is pretty loud on the mix
the claps get lost at around that point
1:38 has like no transition and the synths you used just flat out sounded out of place and outside of the deep, pensive vibes of the song--i wish it stayed subdued instead of becoming so euphorically depressing.
throughout the song, it never really built up in tension or anything. it was intense, dont get me wrong, but the intensity was just like a 5 minute long climax instead of having anything to really look forward to. i think that also had to do with how the song always felt like it was wondering [journey of ages? i guess]. but yeah, it didn't really seem to keep me going very long even with its variations.
and in terms of variety, it changed sonically, but the melody never really progressed--it was more like the same exact theme throughout with different instruments, so my interest got lost.
the progression is very nice! deep and strong haha. i love the bassline in that respect, deep enuf to get my bones shakin a bit :D
more or less strong synth sounds throughout [except for a few that didn't really go with the vibes of the song, which i stated in the cons]
everything else sounds more or less mixed well and it is totally clear. sound effects are strong and mighty, i like! good job!
so overall, i think you basically got a strong empowering feel, but it wasn't built up to very well and didn't hold my attention very long. its a good song, mind you, but it could use work on that aspect. nice job, and i hope i helped :)
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This is the shit!
I gotta say, I'm not too picky with my trance music, but NG Audio has givin me some killer tracks! this is definatly one of my favorites! keep up the good work!
I agree, there are LOTS of good songs, and all my friends make pretty amazing stuff (the ones who make music). Newgrounds is more for artists who just started the music making business, or just want to show off.
Thanks for the review
good chill music. nice when ur buzzin lol
You did awesome on this really good work great achievement I am sure. I do have some suggestions II think the the melodies need some working on just because they feel kinda generic kinda hard to explain except that one that comes in at 2:08 that one sounds fine. and the cool one at the end is good too... Overall nice work!!!!!
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Ill cirtainly consider trying working on it on a remastered version.
Thx for the review
me likey. catchy intro, good transitions and stuff, smooth all the way through and some nice beats.
thanks for ze review
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