Is this from Gradius?
Holy damn I loved that game. What about the rest of it though?
Make it shorter
Also, I always advise people not to build into the song. Have an explosive intro, then descend. The people on Newgrounds usually have the attention span of a squirrel on crack and you have to grab their attention within the first 5-10 seconds. Otherwise, you lose them, they don't leave a review, vote low, and it's just not good for your self-esteem. Also, it's not likely that your average Newgrounder will sit and listen to the entire 2:42 length. When you make music for THIS site, pretend you're delivering the music to a 2nd grader.
I should mention though, that I do like the middle section.
I probably should make it shorter. I'll keep that in mind if I get around to making a new version. Thanks for the review!
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