its back. i think i'm about done with this. thanks for all the feedback guys!

LETS GET READY TO ROCK STEADY.
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OLD COMMENTS:

This isn't a full song. it's pretty short, i was essentially playing around with the style and i wanted to see what you guys thought of it. keep piling on reviews, and at the end ill try to put it all together :D

finished at midnight. ommm nommm nomm nommm. i tried to be somewhat creative but somewhat stock at the same time, so pardon me if it sounds... interesting haha

also i spent very little time on the mix and the intro thus far since i wanted to sleep, and i dont really care about the intro and outro right now since my friend is thinking about integrating it into a larger mix. yarrrrrrr

--if ur gonna listen, please listen to the whole thing.
--if ur gonna listen to the whole thing, please vote.
--if ur gonna give me a low score, i'd be glad if you reviewed.
--if ur gonna review, i'd like constructive feedback.
==if you review, i'll review back [given you, like, submit to the portal lol]

SUGGESTION BOX // things for me to fix:

-the mix - strange clipping/distortion - <<addressed.>>
-middle frequencies for drums, maybe layering <<somewhat addressed>>
-maybe more hat tricks [lol. pun.] <<pending consideration. i kind of like it like this but okay>>
-length - increase it <<later>>
-INTRO- crashes are unnecessary <<though i think that for this relatively short song it adds a nostalgic touch. will fix if i expand.>>
-layer bass with sine subbass. <<done--though the levels may be a little off>>
-lowpass guitar upon 2nd section. ||still in consideration||
-reduce subby frequencies of kick, increase middle frequencies to round out sound. <<done.>>
-||possibly|| reverb the guitar

please help me add on to this list with ur reviews :)

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