Nails On A Chopboard Intro
I didn't like that high pitch part of the intro Ouch!! 43 seconds in my hears stopped bleeding! Good piano work though.
I have mixed reactions somehow.
First of all, I did listen to the whole song, that's great. :)
Now, the beginning melodies are really screech-like, that's one of my least favorite parts actually. It can work better. All the areas of the song with a piano work pretty nicely, and the song is soothing, yet it's vast in some ways (Open-ended? Something around that?).
The end is too sudden and that empty gap around 3:16 was unexpected and strange. I don't know if you can correct this anytime soon or not, but I wasn't so appreciative of that.
I'm listening this song on headphones, hopefully no quality is lost. A good piece I suppose, let's see that masterpiece. XD
Yeah. I agree with the screeching a little bit. I pressed out a melody and it creeped the hell out of me and everyone else in the room. It's the same melody used throughout the song for the most part.
The 3:16 gap is actually an idiotically low version of the melody. There's literally no way for a computer to play it without a woofer. I think I've learned which octaves are "off-limits" now.
And don't worry about song improvement. You'll see another epic song from me like the one I called "Television is Lazier" that will include some of the melody and stuff from here, plus I'm trying this on a new song.