good

i like it but it seems like somthing is missing like the song needs beefing up or somthing. nice tho.

If you have better songs find a way to submit them

This wasn't amazing. but it was enough to catch my attention.
I want to hear the stuff you say is better than this.
This seems like it has alot of un met potential.
It would be wonderful if you gave it another shot.

Size Matters!!

Size is directly proportional to quality. That's why when we steal an mp3 of a standup comedian, they're only 6 mb for 1/2 hour of talk, because the sound quality isn't important. Parallel to that, you have this, a potentially good song that seems to have nothing in it over 16,000 hz wot happened? Bump it, eq it, multicompress it, an give us a raw ("f**k_8mb") version!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rewrite the song to fit, or say to urself 'newgrounds don't matter' but either way give us the all, the everything, this song is waiting to break out of its current eq settings, which suck! Otherwise, give us more of ....well nothing, just that dang eq!'s got to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hope this helps! :P