Drone

I rarely give bad reviews and when I do I try not to be to critical but there was alot in this one I can point out with easy. It was too short and when it did start to build up at 1:11 in it wasnt much of a build up before it suddenly ended. It also sounds like you've just layed some tracks down and shifted about for a minute or so.

Since it is your second beat and I don't know what program you are using but you need to experiment more and play around with sounds. Also don't be afraid to use slightly complex bass lines as they almost always seem to end up working on rnb tracks. As for the intro, it really sounded like it was going into something good but at 0:08 you symbals lightly coming in, prehaps add your main rhymth or bass there to catch the audience straight away.

Overall, it was a good atempt for a second time and you can either take my advice or not.

this isnt hip hop

it needs alot of work but its ok for ya second beat keep at it