Work a bit more on your transitions. Some of them seemed to be rushed so that you could keep up with the beat. speaking of the beat in my opinion its a bit to fast for your piece and needs to be slowed down all together. It seems to me you were trying to keep up with the beat instead of focusing on your solo. Thats just my opinion though.
Great piece, very calm relaxing with a good upbeat.
This continues my story :)
Running through forest: 0:54 to 1:07
Fighting enemies: 1:07 to 2:25
Finding out the enemy warlord was another of his friends: Rest of song