Good effort interesting lyrics

the only thing bad with this is that the flow fell offpoint a couple times. Your effort made it worth listening to.

I enjoyed the chorus alot. Good track.

- Big Bad Lejin

Nice...

You were on point with your flow this time, this is very well done and it came out good and the vocabulary is much better, but I do think the laugh is overdone. If it is a signature then you have to make it sound hot man, honestly it just doesn't blend well. Either way, you have to know when to use those signatures because it shouldn't be done in every song, especially the songs that are deep.

Another thing though is that you should work on wordplay a little more, like maybe multi-syllable rhymes and also having multiple ryhmes in one bar. Other then that you stepped up man, I'm feeling this song. 5'd like always, stay up my n***a.

I'm liking the flow

I think you should up the whisper levels near the end. That's the only thing that I think can be improved really. Great track

bitchin'

your flow is pretty sweeeet. that laugh at the start... i think it could be processed more, a bit of delay and a little reverb and pull the volume down a bit.

In the first verse I think the input gain of the microphone was too high cause it sounds like input clipping. the rest of the song is fine though, well recorded.

What sort of microphone are you using?

the beat isn't bad but a bit simple for my taste (i like more fast kickdrum action). i think the chorus could do with more crunchy, distorted sounds or more epic strings.

the end is very ominous. nice work.