at first i thought the song wasn't going to tie together, but it did, and at the end it fell apart again
not exactly sure what you mean... do you mean the structure wasn't very coherant?
i would sort of agree with that, but at the same time i think that incoherancy creates a different kind of coherancy...
i find it interesting that you say it fell apart at the end when the end is actually a repeat of an earlier motif, which to me would indicate a tie-ing together of ideas. but i guess everyone will see a piece of music differently.
thanks for the review :)
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