it can be built upon.

its not bad, it sounds to me like it has great quality, but the song as a piece sounds a little disjointed . . . almost like one of the sample tunes you'd get on a cellphone :\ I must say tho, I really really, REALLY REALLY dig the piano at the end. catchy and beautiful. take that piano, the percussions, and make a song off of those elements in this song and you'd have something pretty sweet.

Loved the choir-church feel in there. I wish there was more God-themed/inspired stuff on NG, so I am glad to see this piece.