Not too shab. You've got potential. To follow up on the comments below on the vocals, try this to bring them out more: First, compress the shit outta them. I usually go as high as a 10:1 compression ratio, but 5:1 works well for a more natural sound. Then EQ. Filter frequencies below 120~200hz to get rid of the unneccessary low noise. Then give it a wide boost of 5db to 1.6khz~2.4khz (depending on what tone you want to bring out). Give 2db to 10khz for added clarity, and if you want a bit more presence than that, you can boost 2-3db to 7~8khz. Hope this helps.
Thank you, this should really help me out, I'll try this with my next single.
good fora first
yo the beat is aiight, but needs more switch ups man, and also the vocals need to be LOUDER. pretty good for a first shot tho.
I hate rap
But I'm objective. It's a decent song, but in rap/hip-hop/whatever you want to call it, the vocals need to dominate everything else. Try increasing the volume in the vocals, and lowering the volume on everything else.