can i make a suggestion? change >Life should be focused on life, not your next lay to just >life shouldnt be focused on your next lay
I dunno if that's enough syllables. It would sound kinda choppy, don't you think?
well this is the last song
and its been a fun ride.
in retrospect, ill say,
work on your lyrics writing.
and i will work on my spelling.
and i will focus on my next lay.
keepin' the dream alive,
I can't believe you reviewed every single one of my songs....
You have my respect.
Yes, my lyrics make no sense and generally have no purpose.
But..!!! This song makes sense...! and most of my metal songs have meaning!! Just none of those ones are finished yet =p
Good luck with your lay.
I love it, the guitar, the drums, the lyrics, they all match up. They are perfectly attuned to eachother.
My ears are bleeding.
Look for the new, re-mastered version coming next year.
one word~ Epic
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.