*Adds himself to the Author portion of this page.* We really need to make more songs together. With some fine tuning we may actually have something here. I'll talk to you on steam about it.
Author Comments
One of my first songs.
It's about a girl who was betrayed by an angel.
Hope you like it. =P
Lyrics:
Within the darkness I
Sit alone and cry
For what can not be
All alone in this place
Yet I see your face
Come and set me free
So cold here
Behold here
Within your eyes
Freezing and burning and darkness and cold
An angel betrayed me
And broke my wings
Frozen and broken
Unable to sing
Soon fire burns your soul
Waiting to unfold
In a wave of heat
Then fire turns to rage
And your heart is blind
And you can not see
I stand here
And wait here
Make up your mind
Heal me
Or kill me
And leave me behind
Skies break and fall as sand
You must take my hand
If you wish to be
Soon fire burns your soul
Waiting to unfold
In a wave of heat
Then fire turns to rage
And your heart is blind
And you can not see
So cold here
Behold here
Within your eyes
Freezing and burning and darkness and cold
Very smooth and beatifuly ^^
I am giving this a 10 out of 10 because It is awesome but I agree with the others please work on the vocals.. :)
Wow!
I'm so impressed. I'm writing a book with some very heavy themes and messages, and your lyrics had my attention all the way through. I played it twice. What's funny is usually I avoid songs with lyrics in them these days, but I just had to hear a few seconds of this and I was drawn in completely.
Haunting yet peaceful. As a writer, makes me wonder about the story behind the angel and the singer (aka you). Music to my ears but again, the lyrics were fantastic. Good job!
TheMuteSiren responds:
Wow thank you, that means a lot!
I'm actually a writer too, and there is a story behind the lyrics. Maybe that's why you were drawn in?
Thanks again!
this is...
...dark and beaultifull...good vocals and the instumentals fitted very well to the song
by the way do you like sirenia or Tristania ?
TheMuteSiren responds:
I LOVE Sirenia!! Tristania is great also!
Thank you so much!
wowee
it's hard to find songs with good vocals these days ;D
just make the voice stronger and it's going to be awesome.
TheMuteSiren responds:
Thank you! ^__^
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4.83 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Sep 23, 2008
- 5:12 PM EDT
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- File Info
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- 3.1 MB
- 2 min 41 sec
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