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Sep 22, 2008 | 7:51 PM EDT
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3.1 MB
2 min 18 sec
4.19 / 5.00

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Rated 4.19 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

This is my vision of what a rap song should be like!



Rated 5 / 5 stars


I'll give you a 10 even though the intro was crap. Get rid of it ;D
Also... your DNB style is wikkid. ;D

Darkerfire responds:

how did you get to hear my DNB style? lol


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Just Great!!

This is awesome, there is just one thing i didnt like, the intro


Rated 5 / 5 stars

jonas here _/

quit being so damn lazy and finish your projects

Darkerfire responds:

i will finish my projects once you can beatbox my crazy DNB stuff


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Its a happy jumpy song!

What envy said is true, the first 8-9 seconds and about it being a bit thin.

This is an amazing piece of work and I cant put anything lower than a 9 but I do think you can improve on this quite a bit, (youve clearly got the talent).

I love how the song picks up after those first 9 seconds, nothing wrong with it at all!
Its those first 9 seconds that, I think, ruin it for the rest of the song, it doesnt match as well as it could and as you had said in a reply to Telliath you "where" making a rap song but it clearly isn't any more and the change has affected the overall quality of this great song.

More... Oooomph is needed! O.o
Im not saying fill it with bass and whatever else you use to give it a literally oomph feel xD
I would like to see something else in there, something that fits but isnt over powering, but then not too much in the background, it just seems to me like its missing something, hard to explain, but it feels like it needs that something to give it a bit more variety and to fill this gap that seems to hover between the main melody and the background. (dont know technical words)

Love what you did at 1:12, that quietness and soft feel it had was just a perfect combination to the song, its powerful yet has a soft core ;)

At 2:00 it changes to empty out to finish the song, I liked it but also didnt, similar to the bit at 1:04-1:11... to me it didnt completely fit with the rest of the song, I thought it was more of a standard finish that is found in a lot of songs, while the rest of the song seemed new and different.

I cant really say much more than that, overall this is one amazing song!
I cant give any more feedback even if I tried!
Keep up the great work and youll soon be in the number 1 top spot ;)
As ive said before you do have the talent, youve proved it here and on other songs, so just keep at it!

Hope it doesnt seem too critical, its meant to be helpful :)


Darkerfire responds:

Mid range.. Just noticed how much I cut it through mastering, omg
thanks alot for the review Xmillsa!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


The first 8 seconds made me go ew.

But the rest was awesome man. The melody was very rob maythy and cool. The counter melody fit perfectly dude. my only issue was it sounded a bit thin o.O

Other than that it was awesome man.


Get rid of that first 9 seconds.

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Darkerfire responds:

Bah, you have crappy headphones anyway! xD
(thanks for this forced review lol)