I ike the overall beat and tune of the song, but your missing something in it.... i c you said u didnt spend much time on this so il have to congratulate u on that... but it still needs more :D You could turn this into masterpeice
haha. i wish i knew how. its been so long since i've even looked at this song.
Another mesmerizing beat, as much as you might want to pull away it pulls you in, very relaxing even though it may be a bit repetitive i wouldn't mind keeping this on a loop while driving in the car haha but anyways keep it up man hope to hear more soon...
Interesting improvements, however repetetive.
To start: I like your piano and the the way it transitioned into the background. I think the heaviness of it all was good, and your intro was smooth and awesome. Your ending seemed just as great. The variations you tried with the drum and all the other instruments was neat, though it could have been placed better.
Your kick was mediocre. That high pitched sound didn't cut it, and it felt sort of shocking the first time I heard it. The second time in the song it felt alright, but then you cut it short of what I expected.
Overall your song was quite neat, the middle of the song could use some variation and maybe some slow spots to counteract the constant-climax feel you kind of have going. The tune kind of gets stale after a while, so maybe some clear variation instead of some slight changes could do it, but nice job.
I look forward to any future submissions C:
thanks for the lengthy review man. i really appreciate it. keep in mind this was my 4th song i ever made. i personally think it is one of my weaker songs, mainly because i didn't spend that much time on it, and i wanted to try out breakcore after being inspired by nubbinownz and liquidecstacy. unfortunately i did a poor job, and i won't return to breakcore for a while now.
nevertheless, thank you for you interest in my song, and i shall keep your recommendations in mind for my future submissions.
i like it but i wish the piano wasn't so heavy in the begining, and maybe some voice treatment on the piano would be a sweet deal ^_^
other than that its pretty cool...
thank you sir
this is cool and also some of the syths i recognize are from fl studio nice man i like you put the piano in there kinda makes your day happy and also was wondering can you make good songs with the demo on fl studios if you dont have fl studios never mind then
You can make songs in the demo. you just can't save them.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.