I hear a song.
Improvisation is good. And what you have here is a very good sample of that. Though I think this can be made into a good song. Just take the parts that stand out from improvisation and make those into a song.
Hmm... maybe if I have time, I'll see if I can make a coherent song out of this improvisation you have here. I can definitely hear a song out of it. It's like a block of marble that is half carved into a statue roughly, and all it needs is the right vision and carving to bring it all out.
Yea, that's actually exactly what I was thinking... Right now the song is VERY rough (mostly due to my utter lack of piano skills), but I might make it into an actual charted-out song if inspiration ever hits... Btw, feel free to mess around with this improv. I'd be very interested to hear what you could turn this into.
while i greatly respect what you're doing here
i dont like the song at all
im not saying your emotions suck, but if you actually did this song in a manner of "non-improv" if would be amazing...
I agree it would definitely be better if I had charted this out.... but as I explained the comments, I am really sick of doing this...
Thanks for the 9 though. You can check out my two other songs if you're lookin' for some non-improv.
It was good
i liked it, but i wished some of the deeper notes had been stretched a little longer.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! The bass notes really should've been longer, but that was the synth's problem actually... I held down the notes on my keyboard, but the synth was cutting the notes off.... Should probably go fix that.