The message is strong...
iight now don't take this the wrong way but the singing wasn't that good and the flow on the rapping was kind of jumpy. There are parts in the flow that kind of fell of in the first verse and some words I heard were extended more than they should have been. I like that ya'll n***as dedicate and tried to do your best for this track but just work on your flow and delivery and get a better mic if you get a chance. Also get someone that can mix your vocals better because that was lacking too. Stay up.
this was esman's second time rappin and ryan's first time singing on a track so they are kinda inexperienced but i think they have improved on newer songs.. check them out and let us know what u think when we upload them
thanks for the support man
i think this is actually really good
aside from the fact that i pretty much hate rap, this is actually pretty cool. its cool that you'd write a song about one of your friends that died, and that you can actually sing lol.
good job bro
thanks bro, glad you liked it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.