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Star_Crossed (unfinished full)

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Well, here is the long awaited full version... it's not finished... but here's a little something to tide you guys over...

plus for chim chime :D
A worn traveler opens his door, and looks up to the skies. A starry, moon-lit expanse meets him, and the stars seem to dance in front of the traveler's eyes. He must be hallucinating, thought the traveler. But the dance of the Star Crossed was too beautiful. And the traveler watched, hypnotized.

Left and right, the stars threw themselves into the sky, crissing and crossing every witch way, dashing across a wonderful world of darkness and beauty.
The stars wouldn't stop for the world.
They sped up, forming wondrous patterns, radiating intense lights, weaving through the night.
The stars felt like they had never felt before; Such freedom they had never know.
A subtle beat seeped out from one of the stars, a second star created un uplifting tune, and a third continued to dance.
In perfect harmony, more and more people were affected by these mystical stars.
The traveler danced with his heart.
A little girl, lying in bed, had the sweetest dreams she has had in years.
A poor sick soul, bed ridden and burning with pain, felt nothing while the stars danced.
While each soul affected reacted in a different way, each felt the one beautiful, harmonious, amazing, uplifting emotion in the world.
And all because of the Dance of the Star Crossed.


o wait

10/10. There's no need to even give a reason. Anyway, Desyre, can we make babies? :o

Desyre responds:

LOL... um... I think envy might kill you... sorry man haha :)

space happy dance much? :D

this seriously made me think of spore and then creatures dancing on a space ship >:D wow man your just teh awesome :D good going

Desyre responds:

LOL... thanks... :D took a while just to get a full version done... and now for the final :/

Brilliant as always

Wow, can't wait for the full version. Perfect in ALMOST every way. There's something about the second half that just doesn't compare to the demo. I don't know whether thi s is a result of me listening to the demo too much, I'm not sure. I hope it is, though, for your sake. Make it more beaty, more powerful. I'm not a big fan of ambient.


Desyre responds:

Um... ok. LOL! It's going to be a while... gotta get home first... then persuade envy to work on it with me (or at least let me work on it in his presence) then... I have to overcome writer's block >.< BUT when that's done... the final will be posted and will be (I hope) much better than this one :)


Extremely catchy!

Desyre responds:

Why thank you, kind sir :D


BUT!:: in my opinion, when the bass comes in (17 seconds into the song), it makes the other stuff quiter. i think the other stuff should be louder.

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Desyre responds:

Yeah... I've gotten the comment.. a couple of times... -.- as I said before... this is only a version... I will take into consideration your comments :) I appreciate them a lot! AND.. thank you for reviewing :)

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Credits & Info


4.41 / 5.00

Sep 20, 2008
11:52 PM EDT
File Info
4.5 MB
1 min 59 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.