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Star_Crossed (unfinished full)

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Well, here is the long awaited full version... it's not finished... but here's a little something to tide you guys over...

plus for chim chime :D
A worn traveler opens his door, and looks up to the skies. A starry, moon-lit expanse meets him, and the stars seem to dance in front of the traveler's eyes. He must be hallucinating, thought the traveler. But the dance of the Star Crossed was too beautiful. And the traveler watched, hypnotized.

Left and right, the stars threw themselves into the sky, crissing and crossing every witch way, dashing across a wonderful world of darkness and beauty.
The stars wouldn't stop for the world.
They sped up, forming wondrous patterns, radiating intense lights, weaving through the night.
The stars felt like they had never felt before; Such freedom they had never know.
A subtle beat seeped out from one of the stars, a second star created un uplifting tune, and a third continued to dance.
In perfect harmony, more and more people were affected by these mystical stars.
The traveler danced with his heart.
A little girl, lying in bed, had the sweetest dreams she has had in years.
A poor sick soul, bed ridden and burning with pain, felt nothing while the stars danced.
While each soul affected reacted in a different way, each felt the one beautiful, harmonious, amazing, uplifting emotion in the world.
And all because of the Dance of the Star Crossed.



This song was very well made. we admire your work, but what instruments did you use to make this? please answer, we would love to make a song in this style.

Amazing intro. Got me hooked the first time I heard it.

Very well done!

Although I do agree with Morgan. I think the bass drowns out the melody a little. Anyways just letting you know so you can fix that for the final!

Desyre responds:

Thanks :) HELPFUL criticism.. is always welcomed :D


Loved it. Make more!

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I love you ^_^

For writing this song!
I was completely blown away by the demo you did, and i was extremely happy when you put up the rest of it!!
Simply amazing.
It didn't fail my expectations in the least.
I still love the intro of all of the song the most :D
Keep up the great work!!!!

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4.41 / 5.00

Sep 20, 2008
11:52 PM EDT
File Info
4.5 MB
1 min 59 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.