this is good
hehe your disclaimer is funny. i like the song tough. its kinda repetative but not too much. for a newby he is pretty good.
This is actually pretty good, especially if it's his first attempt ever... you should be a little nicer... xD
i don't know what the guy below me's deal is...
Your little bruvs mean.
And his musics crap as well, next time he pulls your hair, pull his harder.
Thats a good idea. Ill keep that in mind