Here's a couple of suggestions:
1: When the beat comes in at 7 seconds...it sounds out of place. However, when the music at 23 seconds comes in it sounds pretty good. My suggestion is to cut out the section from 7 seconds to 23 seconds and have the beat come in at the same time as the music.
2: At 1:10 seconds, instead of combining two melodies maybe just skip ahead to 2:05 and then at the end, combine them which you do at 2:55.
3: I'm not a fan of the ending, it seems lacking. But it's a work in progress.
It's not amazing, but it's Good. I like where it is going.
Thanks for the help man, I'll try this stuff out. Its nice to actually get some feedback. I appreciate it.