Very great sounds...
...but your song needs something more.
It needs a bass which gives the song the rest. If you give me the permission, I would add a (light) bass, show you the result and if you agree you can re-upload it here. I would really like to help you and not make any shit from your track because I really like it.
Hey, if you can make it sound better that's awesome, but I warn you that there is bass already lol. Do you mean I need a better base line, or a different instrument, or is the bass imply to quiet for you to hear? It rumbles my speakers pretty good, but everyone's setups are different.
I'm liking it
Looking forward to hearing the finished version.
The only recommendation I have is bringing that background synth out a bit more. At least, I think it's a synth...