I couldn't understand the vocals. IMO they kill the song but at the same time need to be in there lol it's weird. Anyways try to fix the vocals please and then i'll give ya a 10 xD. Everything else was good.
Before you start saying "vocal sucks", the vocals doesn't really have lyrics at all. :3
It's still a sample, and we're still making the lyrics. XD
Improvements can be made...
well, what caught my attention first was some of the very high treble parts, try to tone these down a tad bit. Some bass just to even out the balance between the tone would help this out alot. Great beat.
Cant wait to hear the full version. =^.^=
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.