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Author Comments

This song has a long intro-build-up, so please listen to the entire song before voting.

I'm just starting to get into various effects and stuff in FL, so forgive me if they sound noobish in this song. I mainly used Soundgoodizer. >_>

Please rate and review. Any tips in the reviews would be appreciated. Trolling will result in an air-strike being sent to your house.

If you vote low, give your reasons why in the review.

EDIT: Lol. I got trolled again. 2.74/5 at the time of posting. I really don't care anymore.


Got Techno?

well i enjoyed it for the most part
and dont worry about rating, pay more attention to the number of downloads that shows more than the rating will

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nice song

Intro sounds like Final Front by kelwynshade

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you love those arps don't you...

good job on this one man. intro was a bit long, but it was managable. the only thing is that this song felt like it was building up to something huge... but it never exploded. it kinda just died off. like i replied to one of your comments on my song saying the same thing. i have a super hard time making my music climax.... anyway. good song.

ps. compress the kick and turn the gain up to like 6. it'll give you that strong deep kick that most songs lack.

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dont worry about a low score seriously

it happens to me and some other other best authors i know so just let it go. anyways about your song. pretty sick i must say. i love the name the overall track is starting to sound more proffesinal. i think thats the glass electric guitar right? i kinda try not to use to much of them because they are on obivous fake guitar. although i must say your use of it is very powerful. your score is pretty intese. the flow is smooth and transitions are pretty nice. in fact looking back to when you first started playing with other samples other then the panio i would have to say your improvment is incredible. something you might want to start playing with is autamative clips (dont know if thats spelt correctly). anyways in fruity loops theres like a bizzilion knobs. some adjust volume other the amout of you know what ever. even the filters or fx you used have knobs. anyways by right click on that knob and going down to creat autimotive clip you can control that knob while the song plays. youll see something pop up in your playlist. so for example if you wan t the volume of your main instrument to slowly raise while the song plays you find its volume knob do the right click, then in the playlist make the autimative volume conrol go up or down. i cant explain it to well. its just something you will have to play with. anyways i hope this helps good look.

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CriticalHit responds:

Yep. I already got advice from a friend of mine; she's a pro with FL, and she dropped me some tips, like the stuff about the mixer and automations.

And yeah, I've already stopped worrying about the score. ^_^

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Credits & Info


4.24 / 5.00

Sep 17, 2008
12:56 AM EDT
File Info
6.9 MB
3 min 47 sec

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