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Sep 16, 2008 | 11:02 AM EDT
File Info
3.4 MB
3 min 46 sec
3.35 / 5.00

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Rated 3.35 / 5 stars
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696 Plays | 97 Downloads
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Author Comments

This is a more active song using only explosions and one knife sound. It's still repititious but hey, for the 4th time, I'm trying to learn. Please review!



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Bland but potentially cool

I like the syncopation and assortment of sounds. This is certainly an aggressive piece. Here are a few suggestions:

-I realize that this is not a melodic or harmonic piece, but it gets repetitive and grating on the ears. Try tweaking the velocity of each note in order to create dynamic contrast. For instance, I would lower the volume of the subsequent two notes following the very first of the piece. That would give it a falling feel.

-With a piece like this, you have to be creative to remain interesting and capture audience attention. Try panning individual sounds to varying speakers. This will create a 3D soundscape that is much more pleasing to hear.

-Try changing up the rhythm. You have one or two basic ideas that you repeat a lot, but they get old. Try adding triplets or new material all together.

-Do more with effects. Add a bit of reverb to certain sounds, and maybe put a bit of delay on others. Nothing overbearing, but enough to make a more colorful piece.

Keep working at it and composing. This is unrefined but has rhythmic potential.