Cool

Very strange. Didn't know what to make of it.But it had appeal. The beat was pretty good. But the song was very repetitive. But as Demos go, it was pretty good.Can't wait to see what it turns into

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Do a full edit!

I'm giving a low rating to this song as you really need to work this through to a finish - the melody needs to be more irregular, as it reminds me of water droplets falling from a cave ceiling, similar to in Dune, for example.

If you could make the melody and counter melody more irregular, this would benefit the tune a lot as it suddenly shows the effect of being in a tranquil, but safe place - similar to what you might be after with your reflection on childhood.

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cool

it has a nice build to it, but it gets taken too far after a minute or so, everything up till then is great but the last addition doesn't add anything, the ending is ok, could stand to fade out out, but what you have works, awesome song

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The song builds up pretty nicely. I like how you add more and more to the song the longer it plays.
But the build up may be a bit too long. Nothing really happens in the song except for the build up. The melodies stay the same throughout the track.
Also, that last part you added (at around 1:05) doesn't really fit to the rest of the song.

Also, the loop coud be a bit better. Let the drums end a few seconds before the song loops over.

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Not bad.

It was alright, but I just don't think everything really fit in the song. It was awkward to listen to at times, but I guess it does kind of go along with it in a sense since the song was a bit mysterious. It would be a pretty decent song for some flash movie that needed an ambient song though. I think this may go a bit better with a movie then it would go with a game, but that's my opinion.

C52

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