like the drums but the synth in 1:10 and forward get kinda off beat, try change the rhythm, to bad your partner bailed out, I would gladly help but I'm only now starting to learn how to create music so not so much help I could give =/
Yeah that last little disorted synth line was ment to be sort of out to keep the song moving, but this is only a clip. I'll try and fix it up a bit.
Good luck with starting producing, it'll be one of the most interesting and frustrating things you ever do..
Thanks for the review!