sounds quite familliar...
this was a pretty good, think it needs a little more work, and also, it also sounds like you just made that up real quick on a sony erricson (the cell phone).
Could have used better synths
Not bad. I've definitely heard this before. What is it from? Anyways, You could have used better synths. I think the beginning took too long to build. But that's just me. Keep up the work.
this is pretty impresive but you need to not make into a constant loop, but like matrixo said keep doin music coz practice makez perfect!
Well this was pretty good for a first mix. I give you an 7 for effort, and some nice transitions/beats and stuff. But this is not really "Original" work. All the tunes that you have in your song are from the MUSIC DJ on ALL Sony Ericsson phones. So that deducts 3 marks off your score.
But by all means, do continue to make more music. Practice makes perfect!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.