hurts a bit

It sounds cool but I totally agree with strikepravus. It's pretty hard on the ears. The leads are way too much louder than the backgrounds drums and sounds. The sounds you chose are pretty sharp and perhaps too high-pitched. You should also make the drums a bit louder and maybe add bass.
6/10. 3/5

Not bad

This starts off well, and the beat isn't bad. It's kind of high pitched and hard on the ears sometimes, though.