rain of fire

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this song was made in like 4 days so quality sucks. My mic wasnt working well i know im gonna get a new mic.



1 for effort. -9 for failure

trike56dude responds:

ok i dont give a shit fuck face. ._.

Has potential, but needs work.

Whenever I hear this song, I keep craving for more, but it isn't giving it to me. I really like the style you've imbued in it, but it isn't enough. If I were you I would try to get rid of some of the choppiness and use this as the intro for some song. This is a great start, it just needs a little more.

trike56dude responds:

thnx this is just a sample of a song im making i might knot submit it to ng though the part u listened to was the riff.

No thanks.

No thanks mate, this one wasn't for me. It would've been better if there was vocals, and teh guitar was just in random places, with random notes. Did you even have a tab? To be honest, you can't really have a good audio just based around a guitar riff. Add some drums, add some vocals, and some bass, then it might just pass through.

trike56dude responds:

k thnx for ur review

Has potential

If you keep working on this one, I can see it as a popular song. The rhythm is too loud for the lead. Start with that, and add some drums. This could be a good song if you work on it.

trike56dude responds:

great reveiw its just idk anyone who can play drums :[


Well to be honest that was really bad. The melody (if you can call it that), wasn't interesting. It sounded out of time and distorted to the point where you couldn't hear what was going on. There was no structure to the song whatsoever. I know you may say it's Heavy Metal, but even the heaviest of metal follows the same basic principles as any other music. You need to rethink what your producing, spend a bit longer, it felt rushed and was not EQ-ed right at all. Spend a bit time learning the basic music theories/principles, and maybe try and invest in some better software.

trike56dude responds:

sigh i didnt really put time into this one, i was half asleep and well, ur acting like a douch, usally i would have someone ells help me with this song cause its only a riff, i made it like that, so yeh.

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1.27 / 5.00

Sep 13, 2008
5:12 PM EDT
Heavy Metal
File Info
516.4 KB
34 sec

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