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sometimes i see you in a dream
sometimes i wake up and i feel you next to me
but in the light that creeps around the curtains in the bedroom
i find that it's just me
i realize it's just a memory

another sleepless night
just another and i take it all in stride
you left behind hole im finding difficult to fill
i keep a love that's just a ghost of love but still
how do you say goodbye?
how do i let this thing die?

one more day
the pages from the calendar
fall one by one upon the floor
and tomorrow's just another
piling up along the way
another cigarette and then
i'll try to go to bed
and maybe i can sleep without
a dream tonight


I freaken loved it.

But i gotta tell ya it creeped me out.
In a good way though.
Thank you.

You know what?

First of all: I'm sorry... I don't really know where the time went and I were so happy when you sent me that PM! I decided to write a rewiev at once, but I just couldn't.. Maybe because I know how you're feeling? I know how it feels..
I... I really love it.. more... make more....
I just don't know what to write anymore.. I once knew, but not anymore...

I love it. Keep up the good work, pal.
5/5, 10/10 :')

Different, creative, unique...

When I was listening to this song I pictured those parts on The Godfather movies when something would be going on that's really important but while this was happening, different important moments were being shown to represent an important factor of the story whether it's about the protagonist or whatever. (I would give a more detailed example but I'm going to far as it is.) My point is that I could picture this song in a movie as a real climax moment, I think it has that much potential. The voice really brings this innocent yet creepy feel. Good lyrics, great job.

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Charming and Unique...

I found this really charming and unique.
It's the sort of thing I'd love to use in a cartoon but there is one problem which is the actual quality of the recording.

There is a lot of "muffling", especially during the third verse.
I'm not sure if "muffled" is a real word but if it is it would be a verb meaning "obscured sounds" - or something.

Other than that the lyrics were great and I loved this song.

I really love the slightly broken delivery of the word "stride" at 0:42.
That was truely special.

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deadspread83 responds:

I'm glad you liked it. I'm not very good with sound, but I think I fixed most of the muffling. I appreciate the kind words.

the lyrics are good

the lyrics depressed me and I liked it but im only saying this from what ive read because I can't hear it.

...so make it louder. maybe add instruments.

deadspread83 responds:

sorry about that...

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3.53 / 5.00

Sep 13, 2008
12:58 AM EDT
File Info
1.9 MB
1 min 39 sec

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