i dont like the long pauses of almost nothing.
You're using FL studio, right? Did you save this, or are you using the demo? If you do have a saved version, send me a link and I'll remix and post it for you.
It was boring, far too short, and not inventive. I liked the lead pattern, but that's about it. The pads you used were annoying- one made this awful drone, as if it was too loud. It overpowered the rest of the sound.
That's what I thought. Your lead melody is kinda strange alone. A stronger melody on top with lengthening would do this short loop some good.
Adding some DnB might be cool too.
btw the little saying "lost" at the end was pretty creepy.
There wasn't really anything special for me sorry.
You should try to make a long One
Hah, glad someone likes it. =) Thanks, and yes, I realize that I needed this to be longer. I'll work on a remix, soon perhaps.