Xtc is up
In the first line: not bad at all!
i like the synth.i like the bassdrum. thats for the pro's.
The Breaks do not affect anything.try to build the breaks as stages.You have to get the listener into it.Pull him inside the Track.
Some Mastering is needed too.the bassdrum has to be a bit louder with a little less sub.
And when i might give you a tip:
More alternation.everything is like.....same and same again.
This needs work, but its worth it.