It's a fairly decent submission, but at times the lyrics are a bit repetitive -- the two lines about the hair, change the second one to something else? I realize you could just be a hair guy or something, but the song would probably benefit from looking at other aspects; physical, vocal (the sound of crying would prolly work), etcetera. And I don't really understand the "fill you up with some filler" line, especially what the hell filler is, please explain?
Good ideas bro, thanks alot.
What's wrong with it?
I didn't find anything wrong with this. It's awesome!
That's one person...
Most people think it sounds bad I guess....
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