Hm~, I do like the piece, it's fairly well done.
I think my only suggestion is lowering the sound of the water and nature effects in the background, so the piano, which sounds lovely, comes through a little more.
Of course, that's just me. ^^ Either way, I still enjoy the song. c:
this is really great thanks for puting it on newgrounds to share :D
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