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This song is kinda lame and is one of our first full songs ever. We need comments so dont hesitate to submit a review! And check out our much better submitions to newgrounds, The Crow Is The Answer and Jihad Soundz. Then leave reviews on those songs! we need all the criticism we can get, positive and negative so speak up and put your input in! oh and check us out on myspace at www.myspace.com/thirteeng uysandahorse


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The intro was good, but then the kick and the sounds got really confusing after 20 or so seconds. There was distortion on the kick, and didn't go well with the ears.

The melody was very unique, i'll give u that. It almost had a native american feel. The main synth after 1:22 was cool, had an interesting melody. I never really got into the song at any point.

I think you have potential. My advice would be to remake a song u really like, so u can figure a could pattern for a song overall. Once u really do well on a remake, then write ur own stuff using a similar pattern. This kind went into a bunch of different feels and genres.

I can see though that u put time an effort into this so good job. There were some cool effects and panning and stuff.

Anyways, I uploaded my first song to Newgrounds. Could you leave me a review? (Track One_RR) in the techno section. It was weird, i had 2 votes of 5 and 2 downloads then i got another download and that person voted a 0 or something. Whats up with that? lol.

Anyways, look foward to hearing ur improvements in the future.

13G1H responds:

Thanks man, we will definatly check your shit out. u should check out our other songs though! Look through my submissions and find The Crow Is The Answer and Jihad Soundz. both are way better then carnivalivore.


Its kind of boring (as you already said in the Authors comments). I think you should give it more of a clear structure. This way it sounds more like a forest while it rains. But isnt it supposed to be Techno? On the other hand liked the kind of scary sound mixture, it would be really cool for a scary game!

13G1H responds:

thanks for the criticism dude. we appreciate all we can get.

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Sep 8, 2008
2:27 PM EDT
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4.2 MB
4 min 35 sec

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