Needs work

It may need work, but it still has a great tune. :)

A lot of your song needs syncopation (Ra-tata-Tah!), with more off-beat rhythms to mix it up a little bit, and to make it less generic.

I also suggest you add more effects to your channels, and try messing around with all the knobs on the channels themselves. The way it is right now, I can recognize just about every single one of these channels as FL presets. Using a Eurogate is kind of cheating, since you only made some of the notes, while the channel does the rest :P (It's different if you created the arp yourself)

I also very much dislike the generic FL Kick, it's in every beginner song, and anyone who's ever touched FL Studios can recognize that it is a beginner song, and will tend to rate it so.

The rhythm and tunes aren't too bad at all. You're one of the luckier ones that only really needs practice with the program, not practice with music theory. :)

much potential!

i see much potential in this song, and i liked the melody thats start at aprox 01:40. I also sugest that you get some other drum samples, it helps alot. I can recomend VEC (Vengeance Essential Club Sounds), it has loads of usable sounds, all from drums to fx, crowd samples to offbeat bass ect ect. But i liked this one, gonna check your other songs aswell :D

4/5
9/10

I'll just say this.

I'm not into trance, but one thing you should do is look around the web for some new drum samples.
You'll notice that your songs will improve when you have the right drums, and spend more time sequencing them.