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I wrote this lets see... 10 mins ago after some rigorous vocal training, this is kinda a cool down.
thought I'd upload it here, see what you guy's think

note: shoot.. It seams I forgot too kut out the biginning..
and I think this is "goth"

close your eye's and wach me enter your soul
dream tonight, and feel me grab hold
I'll never let go.. of you

you feel me enter you want me to replace
I left the exit, so you can have a place
to rest your head
cuz soon you'll be dead

why do you hide under the covers
are you afraid of me?
I will darken all of your summers.
show me who you will be
I will not leave
you alone



Overall a good take (for a demo).

Contrary to previous reviews, I thought the overall flow worked very well with the song - and due to the lack of a lead or percussion, I could very easily see that as an interlude track to another song on a CD (think "Parabol" into "Parabola" from TOOL)...

Nothing greatly exciting, but givin the overall vibe of the song, I think that's what you were going for. I'd actually like to see this song revisited some day... if nothing else, maybe with just some higher quality, as, well, no offense, but at times the vocals get a little indistinguishable and/or off-key.

8/10, 5/5

Could be better

Its not bad you need more wor on music add more instruments

its alright...

the general melody of the song is very good... but... its not that exciting... i feel as if the songs not going anywhere. the vocals are really really shaky and if your going for that the that's good... as for it being goth, goths what ya make it... but this could be general Rock/ Acoustic Metal... but its not really along the lines of normal goth...


Ok, definitely 5/5 10/10, but I gave it a five, here's what happened,

5.00 / 5.00 (- 0.0000020)

like WTF? oh still perfect score.

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3.40 / 5.00

Sep 7, 2008
9:26 PM EDT
File Info
2.2 MB
2 min 25 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.