Overall a good take (for a demo).
Contrary to previous reviews, I thought the overall flow worked very well with the song - and due to the lack of a lead or percussion, I could very easily see that as an interlude track to another song on a CD (think "Parabol" into "Parabola" from TOOL)...
Nothing greatly exciting, but givin the overall vibe of the song, I think that's what you were going for. I'd actually like to see this song revisited some day... if nothing else, maybe with just some higher quality, as, well, no offense, but at times the vocals get a little indistinguishable and/or off-key.
Could be better
Its not bad you need more wor on music add more instruments
the general melody of the song is very good... but... its not that exciting... i feel as if the songs not going anywhere. the vocals are really really shaky and if your going for that the that's good... as for it being goth, goths what ya make it... but this could be general Rock/ Acoustic Metal... but its not really along the lines of normal goth...
Ok, definitely 5/5 10/10, but I gave it a five, here's what happened,
5.00 / 5.00 (- 0.0000020)
like WTF? oh still perfect score.
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