Very Good Start
A very good start to what I think could be a great series! One thing though: The kind of scratchy sounds that begin at around 0:33 are a little too loud I think. They blott out the rest of the music. Turn down the volume on those, but other than that I think its great! Keep it up! I can't wait for the full song.
hey cool, thanks :P I like the constructive critism, i'll work on that scratch.
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