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Please listen past the first minute before voting.

I tried some more effects on this one. If you give it a low score, please at least tell me what's wrong with it in the reviews. Lately, some people have been voting low on my songs for no apparent reason, and it's kinda bastardly how my recent songs end up with scores of around 2.5 because of zero-voters, but my other loops, which nobody cares to listen to, gets a score of 4.2.

[Resubmitted for the above reason.]


pretty good.... but

haha. dude. its all buildup. no climax. dont get me wrong. i have the same exact problem. its something almost everyone has to work on. other than that, super good feel to it. its got some creepy vibes going but it works. 5/5 but 8/10 cause it doesn't blow me away... yet. work on this and you'll have a sick song

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CriticalHit responds:

This was before I got crazy with buildups and everything, so i would have to agree. ^_^
Thanks for the review.

thats what im talkin about

your gettin allot better at flow son!!! i like how it drops at 40 and slowly comes back in. first that hollow drum hits a couple time then you use a harder one with a bass, added nice flow and lots of emotion. your well on your way to making nice music with fl. great work. i lke the mealody. hey my pal sent me some nice sound fonts for fl. i think you might really get a kick out of them. pm me.

worth more than a 5!!!!

man, that sucks....i agree, not much to back up giving you half a score lol. i'm really digging this..i really love the instrumentation...i wish it had a deeper bass....or just a little louder...i think if you really were on top of the drums...some heavier kicks....that would take this song to a whole new level! i'm really hearing prodigy in this...this song is pretty badass...would be almost cinematic with some drums!!! please work on it!!!! this song has so much potential, i hate to see it just sit as is!! i'm jealous!!!

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CriticalHit responds:

I made this on the FL studio demo, so I kind of lost the file for it. >_> I might redo this sometime, because I got the full verson now.
Stay tuned.

Not bad

I think your only major problem is that you're stuck using MIDIs. If you could make this with real instruments, it would have a lot more potential.

CriticalHit responds:

Wow. Nice reason for blowing off half the score. >_<

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Credits & Info


4.05 / 5.00

Sep 6, 2008
12:28 PM EDT
File Info
2.4 MB
2 min 8 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.