AudioAlchemy hit the nail on the head here. It's practically a 10 second loop with very little in the way of variation and especially in production qualities. Spend a bit more time on your work before submitting it to a public domain.
You're not going to go much further than getting on an SNES RPG with this one. This is a clear cut case of proper composition with poor instrumentation. Now, you may not have had the right tools at your disposal, or you may not have taken the time to properly browse your library. Whatever the case, I would seriously consider taking the instrumentation in a completely different direction.
In respect to the melody... The repetitive nature makes it irritating after about 30 seconds or so. It's kinda obvious you didn't spend too much time thinking up this one, and if you did... Well I'm sorry. What seperates a good producer from a boob with a beatloop software is how he uses it. Anyone can learn... Only a few can make it work.
i wasent expecting to get very far with this one but yeah i was stuck with this song and posted it to see how it would do on newrounds thx for the reweiv